CREDITS!?

Shown below are our final credits. We have included title names such as 'edited by' and 'sound by,' we found it was look more professional and sophisticated. We also finalised the title..FINALLY.
Originally I found the apostrophe in 'Beggar's Hollow' unappealing, however our teacher mentioned to us how its acceptable to not include punctuation such as the station 'Kings Cross St Pancras.'
We decided that we should have the title on two separate lines, thus contrasting the light and the dark on the horizon line.
 We managed to overcome the situation where my name was in a white font due to the colours in the scene, by moving the position of the text to the top left where there is high-key lighting.
Personally my favourite frame is Kelly's one, being positioned on the grass it gives the impression that the text is 'standing up.'