After showing Ms Foster our fourth draft it is evident we still have a lot more to work on, here is what she critiqued:
Firstly she spoke about having the Production Companies appearing first then fading them to black instead of having them integrated in with our opening credits.
Secondly were our credits positioning. She mentioned that the arrangements took away from the (incredible) shots used in our montage. Also regarding the credits was the text, she felt that instead of including just our names we should include things such as 'Edited by' and 'Directed by' which we initially wanted to avoid because of what everyone provided to the making of the film.
Lastly she commented on how well the scene changes would look if we matched them to the intense build ups and screeches of our non diegetic audio.
Overall the feedback was good and required editing rather than filming, however our time is limited and with less than a week to go you will find me and Kelly in the media room slaving over the Mac.
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